Our First Doc/Film
Our First Doc/Film
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- chossy0
No it's fine, is the tattoo just a little bit of the story and the rest is about his journey?, because in the trailer the tattoo is given some prominance. Which is a little misleading. As presumably his journey is about struggle commitment goals change etc. which you do have, the stuff at the window about him growing and his body changing and becoming a good leader is really strong stuff. It is a good piece. Good flow, enticing nicely shot creative and has a nice personal beginning especially when he is lying in bed at the beginning as he is looking to his right as we look down on him, it's great as you can imagine being in that situation having trepidations about the day and being restless.