Logo crit

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  • detritus0

    whilst i like rounded sans fonts like that - this one is awful.

    avoid.

    otherwise - there's something slightly vaginal about your logo, and aside from that, I'd like to see less variety in the stroke widths employed. You need more cohesion between the weights - bearing in mind that the font itself has a stroke weight. imo, this needs to match the weights in the graphic form.

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    • 'match' = being compatible with, not being the same. Christ, I think I'm wrecked. Shouldn't've skipped lunch.detritus
    • <<<baseline_shift
    • maybe it's just that g - the rest of the type is inoffensive.detritus
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