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    you might adjust the kerning a bit on the navigation. Or change that font as it's kind of hard to read. Also I would make the phone number stand out a bit more...try semibolding it or something. Under the directory definitely do away with the scrollbar. Make the page bigger or adjust the text, but you shouldn't make people have to scroll.

    Once the flash slideshow finally loaded, I think it's nice. But seriously check out that file size or why it takes so freakin' long to load :) You might also consider changing the background to a darker color so the focus is on the site. Looks a bit washed out with all that tan.

    Anyway that's my two cents. Overall, it's nice. Good job switching from print to web. The fact that you didn't used an aliased or non websafe font for the body copy says alot :)

    • I think I was typing at the same time as Nairn, ignore the stuff I repeated.designbot
    • Seems like your image sizes might be the problem in your slideshow...I would save them for web out of Photoshop at a quality of 60.designbot
    • of 60.designbot

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