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- _salisae_0
- il ikedigdre
- love it love it love it. you do american really well ;P if that makes any sense at all!kelpie
- thanks kelpie! :) i hope this doesn't mean you think i am obese!_salisae_
- hell no!kelpie
- like the type. but something looks unbalanced.moamoa
- i'd appreciate any further articulation you can muster, moamoa_salisae_
- I´ll try it. it tillts to the right, probably the position of the star is the reason. the space (brown) between all the type looks messy, its not a nice formmoamoa
- looks messy, its not a nice form.. or not balanced ;)moamoa
- arghhhh my english sucks when I try to crit specific points.moamoa
- my english sucks anywaymoamoa
- ok i think i know what you mean. you're looking at the counter shape primarily._salisae_
- sweeeetliveforever
- I like it, but something seems odd about the text.Jaline
- I think it's the fact that the overall design is so symmetrical, while the Starr Sweets is notukit
- Looks good! Maybe try having the top curve on sweets follow the bottom curve on starr?jiaf
- ahh i see now what you mean .. thanks!_salisae_