Font critic II

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• gramme0

  #2. It seems to fit better with the rest of the letters, which reminded of an extended Gotham or a slightly condensed Sackers. I know this is optics, but when the crotch of the M is on the baseline it makes the whole letter look narrower.

  I agree with max_prophet re: the down-stem of the G. It seems like a superfluous detail. I've said all along that you'd benefit from a simpler G a la Gotham.

  I agree with Jay, the S is looking better but could be ironed out a bit right where it curves downward. Have you tried flattening the beginning of the curve a touch?

  Strong work guys.

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  • i concur with the Gdigdre
  • thanks grammer! much appreciated! the simpler G will definitly come. we will keep on working on the S tomorrowmoamoa
  • and consider your suggestion. great feedback from you!!!moamoa
  • no problem friend :)gramme

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