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  • jox0

    come on guys, seriously? wtf is up with all the smart-ass comments, "worst site i've ever seen"... etc. That's as far away from constructive criticism as you can get.

    First of all, I would as mentioned earlier, work on the size. It's huge and took me over a minute on a really fast line.

    Second, I would work some more on the typography. I think it's too big and the fonts doesn't really match with the rest of the site. Plus, you're mixing too many different fonts. Stick with one or two, and don't mix serifs with sans serifs.

    Third, I think it's a bit too messy. Take a look at the titles, I think it's written at least 5 times on each page, in different angles and sizes. I would clean it up, as well as getting rid of all the lines that kind of "disturbs" when you read.

    With that said and done, you're on your way! Good luck!

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