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- ian0
I like the idea of the different sized pages and the way they overlap and reveal a little of whats on the next page. However, Im not keen on the photos, I do think they are a bit ott on the lurve, very posed and staged, that being said, this thing is supposed to represent the two people getting married so they may well be like that.
If you are doing it, the thing I would say are, this is going to be very expensive to create, even if you were to print digitally, but if its your wedding present to them then thats cool. The photos all seem to come from different sources with different tones, this kinda makes it look like some were just snap shots while others studio shot by a pro. If you were to make em consistent it would help the overall piece feel more unified. And the type does look like it needs a fair bit of work.
Just my opinions though.