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- Nairn0
The middle one's working best for me - but it suffers a little from what the other two options do - it's still a bit scrunched up. The start and end, particularly.
I don't like the way you've compressed the Os - they don't mirror the full circles found in the D, E & S at the beginning.
the D's quite scrappy - it's not leading the word as boldly as it should. Also, it's dropped a little, so DES looks like it's fallen away and is catching up with the rest of the word.
The dots on your I and J look a bit like Playmobil penis'.
On the anti-scrunch side - I like how you've merged the G & N in 1 & 3 - it's like your making a new letter for the 'gn' sound.
Play with it a bit more and I think you'll be on to a wiener.