Opinions,crits,insults etc...
Opinions,crits,insults etc...
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- Nairn0
You really need to work on the details more - it's where the strength in these types of graphics come from.
First off, as v5 says - there needs to be a story - some narrative or purpose to define the form of the graphic you're creating.
Secondly - the details! you've got rounded edges against sharp ones, non-uniform spacing between elements, curves not fitting into each other - it's all over the place.
Id I were you, I'd try a simpler version with far fewer elements all of which are absolutely hard-aligned to a grid.
Set yourself some rules - eg. elements x, y & z can be spaced 10px apart, whilst elements a,b & c can be 5px apart - no more, no less.
Also, despite the length of this response, asking for a crit for a single graphic is stupid!