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• skref

  I, also think its time you scrapped that website. Detritius makes very valid points above.

  I would just say about the portfolio section, get straight into the work. You have three sections in 'logos' and each one brings you into the same clatter of work. There is no point whatsoever in doing that.

  In the websites, you also have three options, brochure, website with cms and cms. Surely it should just be static or cms. You've just added another section which is confusing.

  And a minor point, but when I see 'we specialise in...' I assume that you specialise in something. Not two things, and certainly not two things as vague as 'design for print and web'... that kind of just means you do everything, doesn't it?

  • Theres extra punctuation and grammatical errors in there, try to overlook them, please.– skref

  

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