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It says 'caravans' in the company name, do you really need to back it up with a caravan icon? Also - the sun-ray window things really don't work.
If I was handed this to dom something with, I'd probably mirror the caravana and adjust its diagonal edge so it matched with the diagonal of the italicised type you are using, and then tuck it in to the end of the word 'caravans' - maybe the trailer hook thing can adjoin the letter S?
I'd be questioning whether it was correct to make 'caravans' bold and whether go go works better in Caps.
Needs a fair amount of tweaking and the type is very tacky, you have one very basic laymans idea here currently.
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