ctrique 1212 Responses

Last post: 2 years, 7 months ago | Thread started: Apr 19, 06, 2:10 p.m.

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• easy_target

  quick site crit needed and first time for every thing on newstoday...

  

  churr

  easy target

  Apr 19, 06, 2:10 p.m. – Permalink

• Jaline

  too cluttered for my liking

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:12 p.m. – Permalink

• gfro

  not up to par.

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:13 p.m. – Permalink

• dinky

  so damn busy. text needs more room to breath. more letting etc etc

  where are your borders for each grid? where are you buffers?

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:13 p.m. – Permalink

• easy_target

  hey thanks, noted & will make changes..

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:24 p.m. – Permalink

• uberdesigner

  you mispelled sking

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:26 p.m. – Permalink

• Jaline

  you mispelled sking
  uberdesigner
  (Apr 19 06, 14:26)

  ?

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:27 p.m. – Permalink

• blackspade

  "churr" ?

  i smell a kiwi

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:29 p.m. – Permalink

• easy_target

  i've mis spelt alot of things whilst typing tonight mainly due to the wine consumed over dinner but i dont think i mis spelt skiing....

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:31 p.m. – Permalink

• nocomply

  Def. too busy and cluttered. Need more spaces between the boxes and between the text and the borders of the boxes.

  Also maybe flip to a mirror image of your header graphic so you can put the domainname on the left instead of the right.

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:35 p.m. – Permalink

• easy_target

  hey blackspade yeah kiwi as the come but in rome italy for a year....you still in dunnos? (if memory serves right...its been awhile)

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:37 p.m. – Permalink

• pye

  lift chair in the top image is hanging at an angle, makes it look like they're in an avalanche or something

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 2:52 p.m. – Permalink

• Tara

  I don't really like the style. It feels so much like a cheap advertisement. Yes you are selling but you have so many colors- why not pick a simpler palette?
  Also, you need to think about hierarchy with your type. Maybe the headlines should be in caps or bigger?
  In the boxes, why not have less type and more space and then have a link to click for more info.

  

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  Dog-earApr 19, 06, 3 p.m. – Permalink