quick crit please 1313 Responses

Last post: 2 years, 10 months ago | Thread started: Nov 7, 05, 12:06 p.m.

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• bulletfactory

  initial concept for real estate site.
  

  

  
  feedback appreciated!

  i know, i know.......... i need to speak with them about some logo development...

  i sharted when i saw their current stuff.

  http://www.rwssc.com/

  one step at a time :)
  thanks!

  Nov 7, 05, 12:06 p.m. – Permalink

• cruz_azul

  way better ...

  i would play with the colors for the nav , news , and footer w/logos

  the same color down looks funky ..

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:12 p.m. – Permalink

• arinya

  It's abit flat. I'd use a more interesting image for the top banner and put some more color into the layout. One color more will do the trick.

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:14 p.m. – Permalink

• rockonski

  works for me.

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:16 p.m. – Permalink

• mnix21

  "works for me?" ...direction like that makes designers lose jobs.

  Here's what I noticed:
  - "WELCOME" up-top seems out of place and since its in the same typeface as REALTOR, I lean towards thinking RWSSC mean Realtor Welcome...
  - Dashed-lines. Why? At least not between the nav buttons. Looks like cut-out coupons.
  -Margins: increase the spacing between the tan box and the login section.
  -I like your overall grid and placement of sections (content, search, login, etc.)

  Nix

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:21 p.m. – Permalink

• rockonski

  hey nix, he said quick crit first of all, you chump. and i'm not here to keep anyone employed. i had a quick look and it worked for me. i know you may not like that and that's like, your opinion, man.

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:24 p.m. – Permalink

• bulletfactory

  thanks for taking a look everyone! anyone else?

  I'll take some time and possibly re-evaluate my color selections. viewing it in my office (under fouresent lights/older monitor/etc) it feels a bit flatter than it did in my studio...

  I agree, there needs to be some more profound imagery (esp. on the homepage) I am hoping that they can send me some nice pics, because as of now, they've sent nothing - nice imagery is a must for a real estate site.

  The "Welcome" text does feel akward, I'll do something about that....

  The dashed lines..... I added them to break up the menu, and liked how they compartmentalized the search/member login/announcement sections so I left them.... Without eating up too much dev time, I'll investgate some other options.

  I appreciate the input - Thanks!

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:50 p.m. – Permalink

• jevad

  pls see the 'Grids' thread

  

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  Dog-earNov 7, 05, 12:52 p.m. – Permalink

• bulletfactory

  Just an update.....
  Got some feedback, from the client... having their building as the main image was a must, so i asked them to send images of their building and kind of went back to the drawing board....

  the idea was to have a standard layout, but give it interest and maintain a fresh look by use of color and imagery (to be controlled w/ css).
  my initial thought was to have a layout for each season.... i showed the client two (still waiting for any revisions....

  so i thought i'd see if the folks at nt had any suggestions

  thanks in advance!

  orig. layout
  

  

  new - spring
  

  

  new - winter
  

  

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 8:33 a.m. – Permalink

• jevad

  fucking MILES better mate!

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 8:35 a.m. – Permalink

• digilee

  tons better.

  main thing is to wait until you've all of the content in before nailing down the final scamps.

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 8:40 a.m. – Permalink

• the-saint

  A lot Fresher dude, good work

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 8:44 a.m. – Permalink

• bulletfactory

  thanks a ton guys!

  yeah diglee, final content will determine how all of the details fit - most of the time i design everything "airy"( with dummy text for content), and the client enters WAY too much text in the areas, which loses my initial effect - so we'll see how this turns out

  i really felt like i had a better game plan after running the initial design by the crew here, with a few close colleagues and (of course) client input! hope they like it!

  thanks again!

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 8:58 a.m. – Permalink

• Dancer

  Good work Bullet

  

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  Dog-earJan 5, 06, 9:15 a.m. – Permalink