Video Crit
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Hey guys, I have been having fun entering these video contests and thought I would send it your way for a good ol fashioned crit. This one is for Bounty paper towels.
http://www.poptent.net/media/194…
Concept, shot and edited in less than 3 hours. I always see these contests too darn late to plan it out, but happy with final results... thanks.
- garretttt0
to slow of editing... just saying...
music makes it feel slow as well...
jump cuts are sometimes key in getting commercials across
- locustsloth0
The payoff is great. i would have actually left in more of the face wiping, showing the dual funcionality of the paper towel.
probably would have been better off if you cut in a shot of a full sink of dirty dishes after she looks in the cupboard and then cut to her looking at the towels (and then the shot of the towels).
Otherwise, cute concept