Logo crit please
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- ********
Its really a low budget logo.. I can't find clients paying a decent price.. most off you won't even open illustrator at this price..
but, I always try my best,
here it is:
but ignore the last one
- detritus0
You should change the cup to a mug.
- and just have it in a cirlce and drop the crown, it's a bit 'show and tell'Bluejam
- who drinks mugs of tea? it's unnaturalTheBlueOne
- I was kidding, I suggested yesterday he change it from a mug :)
(ps, I drink it from a mug)detritus - i have no tea cups. i drink from mugs, but they are big rounded mugs7point34
- yes mugs, i do it aswell********
- skwiotsmith0
Type choice is uninspired...feels just meh.
The second from the top seems the most promising for a start for a mark, but, well, not sure if it's there. Feels like you just kind of stopped after awhile and said 'good enough'...
- meffid0
all I can think of is teabagging someone... apologies, I'm just immature.
balance the green thing (height) to the left of the type then done.
- TheBlueOne0
I like the cup and crown thing...needs more work though
- detritus0
I like the top row of logos.
I think I prefer the 2nd colour option.
I think I preferred the layout you showed yesterday. Maybe.Last one's too generic - I've been picking up on all the crappy employments of single leaves in logos, used to denote some biological affiliation, and it's beginning to piss me off. Such a cop out.
- Also - have you tried brown at all? Perhaps, like manshed hints, as a complementary colour?detritus
- isn't brown to much "coffee" instead of tea********
- manshed0
you have all of the elements.
your color swatches are good, try two colors at once.
as for the cup, leaf, and crown, id settle on combining two instead of all three. possible a leaf and crown or work on the cup and crown a bit more. try an overhead view using the leaf(knockout) in the crown cricle(colored)
otherwise, lookin good.
- drgs0
I dont get it
- sintaxera0
I like the second one down with the crown on top of the cup (with the second color.)
What if the crown was made by the steam from the cup? or if the top of the cup itself had the points of the crown? I dunno...just brain farting a bit.
- or maybe that steam was drifting up through the crown.Point5
- ********0
2nd row, get some type working with it.
- Point50
this reminds me of a logo I did a few months back with a beer mug and a crown.
- phatlee0
Not sure on your colour choice... Grey doesn't say tea to me!?!?
Couldn't the crown be a droplet!? Maybe cheesy...!?!?
- Point50
and man, you would think that people who wanted a logo reflecting royalty would pay a decent price... bastards
- MrNibs0
what about simplifying? I like the tea leaf reference and the crown. (somewhat overused symbols but recognizable and not a bad thing) Perhaps try combining the two? I could see an interesting relationship with the leaf shape and the shape of the crown. If you can reduce it down to a cup and leafy crown coming out of the cup, that might add a unique twist to some common symbols.
- ********0
the cup should be replaced with a beer stein and the word tea should be replaced with beer. Thank you. Thank you will be $250 please.
- ********0
I actually like the typeface, it feels natural an appropriate. I also like the crown logo to the left of the type.
- 7point340
- too corporate?7point34
- that tea looks like it was left out overnight_salisae_
- likin' the graphicBluejam
- ❤ the clip art********
- http://blog.pentagra…7point34
- liked it better when pentagram did it.johndiggity
- hah great :D********
- ha, wondered how long it would take people to get it.********
- hahah.. nice pentagram rip. :) well done!PonyBoy
- ********0
thanks for all comments, I'll look what client says and try to convince him to work further with this and not to go on fully other concepts.. since I think this will work with print aswell..
will look for some other type's.. any suggestions?
wil do some other colours too.Thanks alot
- johndiggity0
can you drop "the" out of the name at all?
- i don't think so :s
i'll ask******** - Why? I quite like the The.detritus
- ..and, more to the point, I'm sure the client does too. Which is why they put it there.detritus
- we all know clients don't know shit about anything!johndiggity
- i don't think so :s