updated my site... thoughts?
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i've updated my site with a new look. thoughts?
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- heavyt0
needs more frames
- univers0
I think its a step in the right direction mate.
- jfletcher0
by "complimenting" I mean they don't work together. The work seems more saturated and complex while the site is simple and the type/grid/layout isn't as well thought through.
also, lose "est 2007" it serves no purpose except to say "I haven't been doing this long", which probably isn't something you want to advertise.
- doesnotexist0
doesn't look refined enough, looks kind of sloppy actually.
- utopian0
Is this actually a new look or it is indexhibit?
The work itself is nice, but what is up with the "toilet seat shape coral pink frame" around your own visuaal logo? It is distracting, unnecessary decoration and is an eye soar in general, the typeface is nice in visuaal.
- i was kind of aiming for a store-sign more than a toilet seat. maybe i should add that border back in from www.visuaal.com/visu…...********
- unnecessary decoration? is design anything else?********
- i was kind of aiming for a store-sign more than a toilet seat. maybe i should add that border back in from www.visuaal.com/visu…...
- epigraph0
I think that went well, don't you?
- epigraph0
Why use indexhibit? You could code that or do it in dreamweaver much nicer.
- Llyod0
"Built with Indexhibit"
why do you use some shitty web site builder when all of your port sites are of higher quality?
- NewElpaso0
looked much better before..
- neue75_bold0
what are you from Texas or something?
- tank020
nice pyramid,
i like this much more than the old style.
but i would lose the est., it stands a bit lost there...
- mild0
that logo is big and the homepage doesn't feel right maybe to do with indexhibit, it feels all shoved in the corner. I just don't like sites built in indexhibit.
- ian0
I don't like it. I don't really like indexhibit except in rare situations (see the forcetwelve site) its generally quite ugly and clunky looking unless its styled really well. This site isn't though.
Century Gothic as a web font for me doesn't work. The black and red are too stark.
The text in the menu doesn't have enough space either side, the headings don't correctly delineate options (for instance, the info on top looks out of place) I hate the index page because nothing seems to line up. and the logo is just floating in space, away from everything.
Im sorry but in general the whole thing looks cheap and thrown together, which is a real shame because the work is good, its just not getting a fair deal in that site.
- 23kon0
cant look at your logo without seeing
they OWN that typeface over a solid colour block dude.the indexhibit site doesnt look great - im sure you could do better yourself.
the design/logo/photography side of stuff is good skills though.- Whoa, holy jeebus. When I looked at it, it hadn't refreshed the logo. New logo is better than last but waaaay too big.ian
- Dancer0
drop Century Gothic as a body font
looks pony
- vespa0
Century isn't working well here for the body copy, it's not a great font for screen.
Also the titles at the top can't breathe. Information heirarchy could possibly be improved with point size variations?
Excellent work tho, and I like the colours.
- blankface0
Make the logo a wee bit smaller.
Nice work tho...