Party Flyer, crit
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Hello
this is the smaller version of the flyer.
I'm also making this one in A3Version 1
http://flickr.com/photos/tomhuve…Version 2
http://flickr.com/photos/tomhuve…I have some changes in mind for version/update 3.
Please your opinions for wich you like, on wich one I should work more, go for 1 or 2.. with your suggested updates,
thanks alot!
- pr20
it looks too healthy and too light to inspire me to and dance all night while getting drunk.
- drgs0
nr 1 maybe, without the blood drop... kerning is intentionally horrid?
- ********0
yeye the kerning, that was on my list :D
the drip is actually not meant te be blood, but 'juice' but I will see to remove it.thanks for comments
- doesnotexist0
says a lot about juicey/juice, but nothing about music. I would ditch cooper black unless this is a hip hop thing. the first is better, but it's not really sending that dance all night vibe. what's with the lonely drip?
- DaveO0
Why not whack everything into greyscale and up the contrast up way high and multiply it over a colour.....totally different but will give you a good comparison?
- maybe even save for web the entire thing and gif it into 1 color, then overlay that color...doesnotexist
- Ampersanderson0
Juice I see. Electric I don't. Could you replace the fruit with some sort of instrument or something related to the music?
But honestly I like the bounciness of the second one better. the first one seems too stiff.
- maybe some speakers to replace the strawberries...rodzilla