Poster Crit.
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- ********
Right, new versions of a series of posters I have been working on. Your thoughts would be appreciated.
- mr_snuggles0
You're getting nothing from me today... I think you know why...
- VectorMasked0
as I said before the 1st one is good.
the 2nd one is ok, and the last two are not that great. I can barely see the figure in the 3rd one because of the colours
- Bluejam0
drop the white keylines on the 1st and 4th! + play with the scale of the elements on the page (ie enlarge then until they are cropped by the edge of the poster).
think you got something good goin' ...
- kev_charlton0
as I said before the 1st one is good.
the 2nd one is ok, and the last two are not that great. I can barely see the figure in the 3rd one because of the colours
VectorMasked
(Mar 23 06, 09:44)agreed.
- Chief0
i like the concept and the posters for the most part. perhaps changing up the background colors or using the same blue. i don't seem them working together if they are hanging next to each other, as they are a series. just my 2cents.
- fresnobob0
What is it?
- digitalswarm0
I feel like after a month, those colors would annoy me.
- PublikStar0
i like the first one
- ********0
first one has definite gay bar potential
- joyride0
What is the goal of this poster. If its a poster just for the sake of being a poster. Then well, its for sure a poster. But, I'm not really clear what your trying to say. The first one is looking down a cup of almost finished coffee right?
- shilohous0
crittles
hey guys, i was up all night working on this bad-boy, it represents the shifting of global warming. the polar ends run from south east, to north west, signifying the opposite of where it should be heading. the book is closing soon, and was hoping you could shed some light on colors and what-not:
thanks.
magicpatch
(Mar 10 06, 12:56)
- ********0
Yeah, nice one shilohous.
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www.socket-studios.co.... [gif]They are loosely based on the various systems that enable life as it is on this planet.
Cheers.
skt
(Mar 7 06, 16:34)
- ********0
What is the goal of this poster. If its a poster just for the sake of being a poster. Then well, its for sure a poster. But, I'm not really clear what your trying to say. The first one is looking down a cup of almost finished coffee right?
joyride2
(Mar 23 06, 11:06)They are visual representations of processes and systems that exist on earth broken down into simple geometric shapes.
Do posters have to sell something for them to be of any value?
- rasko40
where is number 2?
- GreedoLives0
ooo the fucking water cycle...
i must've drawn that shit seventeen times over the last three years for a variety of schoolbooks.
so sick of it.
- ********0
yeah, number 2 doesn't really fit with the rest so it's out. I still need to think of a replacement. Or re-number the others.
- gfro0
Illustrator at it's worst
D+
- rasko40
I like the look of these, I think perhaps you should have a paragraph of text explaining the process in question, I think this would make the poster educational and therefore more vital, I also think you should look at the typography, it looks a bit of an afterthought, perhaps I'm wrong, but yeah, a para of text could give you something else to work with and give it that extra gnnn grrrrr ummph*
*technical terminology
- mr_snuggles0
agree with Rasko about the text bit.
but man, these are getting better and better, 4 is the weakest so far...
what do you think about them skt?
