seed type treatment
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- ********
first time for everything eh?
still learning and , enjoying the progression
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- ********0
as you can see it differs from the logo above
still trying to find out something that works
- ********0
- GreedoLives0
personally, i like it (the logo type), but don't slap those rainbow colors on it. it cheapens it.
- doesnotexist0
try some slab serif-age and check your email.
- ********0
for sure
and the rainbow colors are what make us,k multicultural ya dig
- ********0
I like the thinner weight best, but I'm not sure you're asking for a crit.
Are you asking for a crit?
If so I like thinner weight best.
If not. Never mind.
- ********0
the tendrils seem ok because they merge with the letter but the evergreen looks out of place
- boxcar0
I agree with an earlier statement that the rainbows make it look cheap. Other than your first B&W comps, everything else feels cheap. Stick with a solid colours, moving away from flashy pointless ideas.
A better intigration [sic] of the mark with images would give the mark a stronger feel and purpose.
- ********0
there is no question of me usin multiple colors w. this, i just may try different ways of displaying the gradient, like nopattern does w/ people, just w/ text you know, lightly around it or something
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oh, anything that helps me i'm all for it, its the bullshit i could care less about,
thanks
- ldww0
did you hand draw all those curly things? or where did you get them from?
- ********0
did you see the program i was using
- Fhry0
I think the type tratment is well crafted but I am not sure about the single drop oozing down. The ornaments and especially the tree figure gives a natural feeling and the drop makes me think that the logo/treatment states that the nature is polluted or bleeding or something. Just keep in mind that a single drop might mean a lot.
- kelpie0
nice stuff son, very nice. agree about the colours, the evergreen and the cum dripping off the leaf though. Lose them and you're onto a winner ;)
- boxcar0
Ditch the gradients. That is about the only other thing I can suggest. While the logomark is very contemporary, the gradients make it feel cheap and like something you would just throw away.
Solid, bold colours. That's my vote.
And yes, I agree, lose the drip.
- ********0
i needed a way to symbolize water
- ********0
i needed a way to symbolize water
- ********0
water or liquid?
- ********0
water is the epitome of liquid