site crit pt. II
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Second Attempt.
The client is very fond of basic geometry and he loves
his Swiss style identity (even his old one was all Helvetica).He kept asking for very basic geometric shapes and few colors.
So i went all the way and tried this (minimal) Swiss layout.
To make it more Swiss i chose Geneva for the text.
:)No menu functionality yet, the img is clickable though.
Let me know if it works.. i would also really appreciate a screendump of Windows users here.
ta!
- mrdobolina0
very clean
- mr_snuggles0
I preferred the direction of the last one. this one has potential though, yet it's harder to crit at this point...
- jevad0
pimp
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thx dobs.
those img borders don't belong there!
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monsieur dobolina, are the borders around the images gone now?
both photo and teeny weeny tiny rectangle bottom right corner...
- ewo0
fucking spot on mate
i don't think it's boring at all
- ewo0
btw did the client choose the color scheme?
it's great
- mrdobolina0
still there, looks real biffed in IE. I give daddy a Screenshot in 1 minute.
- ********0
cheers. :D
i am thinking of adding some splash with a strong composition of some large geometric shapes and the logo somewhat bigger...hmm..
it's less user friendly but it gives it something like a cover, just like a book..
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ewo: this green was part of his previous id, more or less.
he did not have the exact green anymore so i had to guess, but this is the cleanest and most fitting green i could find.
- mrdobolina0
getting the default blue color around that link.
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yeah i know what was wrong i think.. forgot to add border: none; in the img a ..
should be gone now?
i hope?
- instantok0
nice and clean...if you are going to include the validation links i think you should group them with the "design by vormburo" link
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anyone else?
i just want to know if the borders are gone now so i can call it a day..
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instant, thx for the suggestion, but this way it balances the grid.
i am very strict on the grid system i layed out for this one..
i will think about it though!
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here is the grid:
so anyone on windows can tell me how the images look now (for ie too)? borders or not? it is 3am here.. :)
- visualplane0
I like the colors, and the simplicity of the design overall. The details, layout works very well. The three white shapes above doesn't work for me. Maybe add some transparencies to accentuate.
Love,
vp
- mr_snuggles0
hey grid boy, trim those images on the right hand side if yer 'so strict' :P
- ********0
no, you got to break it every now and then!
:)
so..for real, NOONE else but dobs is on windoze here??
- emokid0
on windows. still seeing a solid blue border around the image.