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  • detritus0

    Is it important for you to point out that you are a 'Scottish designer'?
    Guess it could be if you're going America-way. If it is aimed at our US cousins, I'd ditch the No Talent Cunt thing - I can't see them getting that. I also hope you're going to populate that are with more content - if I'm an employer looking at your site, I probably already know your name and that you're a designer.

    I like the intro fade, colours, logo, basic structure - but I don't like the wee text you've gone for - it's, well, a bit wee, and it feels like a half-arsed choice to accompany your logo. imho, obviously, I have no quantifiable data to back up my opinion.

    YOUR LOGO IS FUCKING BRILLIANT, BY THE WAY.

    • i fucking hate about sections, and 'scottish' was for line length only.
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    • font choice matches the card. just flash is shit at rendering them.
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    • ha ha, fair enough. One smll thing - I might appreciate an underline to remind me which section I'm on. I'm stupid, see?detritus
    • tried it, threw it out. fucked up my base line init.
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    • brilliant logo? waa?
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