Logo Crit

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  • Nairn0

    Again, I skulk in Mayo's shadow.

    Personally, I'd have a couple of shots at re-drawing the dog - nothing too complex or involved, just attempt to simplify - cartoonify (if you will) the form, so it fits the font (and the dot).

    At the moment, his dog looks kind of like a PShop\Posterize of a photo, which jars with your solid, vector forms.

    Maybe you could have 'fido', the dog image and '.'/'.com' in dark with 'finder' and maybe 'com' in a lighter tone?

    If you're going with this set up it's important to ensure the dog's nose stands out.

    Also, I preferred your fonts choices from yesterday.

    Good luck, man!

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