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- kelpie0
what's the font? if you've got different faces I'd change the weight for the details, for me they look a bit one-dimensional... I'd throw my hat in the left align ring too btw, though I know what you mean about use of space. I reckon the effect of the negative space would make up for that though...
Illustration looks good but part of me is thinking the feathers round the "eye" look a little clumsy (I often see things different in print that on screen though, the weight of the illy could work really well for me there - sorry if that's nae help at all).
Good all round, nice and striking. I could see a polo-necked gentleman in NHS specs handing me that ;) I really like the choice of face (I just hope it has a "light" version)
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now find my font ya hoor.