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i've seen worse.
not many, but they exist.
The T doesn't look like a T. The styling is very early '80s. Too many elements: check boxes (filled in ones make no sense), a random and unnecessary .com—is that an outlined heart!?
I think that starting this thread with "This is not my work" pretty much sums it up.
i think the T on Oto is not completly clear, It can be confused with an R, unless its a very common work and its obviously an T.
The typography looks off between the gray and red letters, doesn't look like the same font.
The "i" in Redi is not clear too, I read RED the first time.
And the tagline typography doesn't looks like is something for cars, I don't get why using a heart
The tagline is ok
OTOREDi: drop all those treatements on the font, use any super grotesk font and fill with plain colors.
way too much shit going on. tell them start over with a singular message to communicate, not 8+
I read ororedi...
is it a website only? i'd lose the .com
pick either the check or the heart or the stacked squares as the i, too many elements.
heart says dating site to me, so i'm already confused
punctuation isn't necessary in logos, only literature