Crits please on this logo
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- MHDC
It's for an iPhone app.
Targeting 18-24 demoIt's meant to be fun... you'll be able to post a pic and leave a caption to a live stream of users and get instant feedback. Because its realtime you can then chat with those people.
Does this look age appropriate? Any other suggestions would be very much appreciated.
- fredddddd0
"I-P" is too close together?
- hotroddy0
I think design is very relevant to your demographic - playful, youthful, bubbly
- Fax_Benson0
Looks good but the curves on the blue outline are a bit all over the place - top of L, i and bottom of F, P. I'd shorten the foot of the L and move the i further back from the P as suggested.
- trooperbill0
start with the app icon and work out from that.
- fooler0
I like it... except I would try and make the vertical and horizontal part of the font the same width. Hey, you asked!
- smrz0
I think you could make more out of the chat icon. I get that the upside down "i" plays off the app name, but the chat icon gets lost. I noticed something was going on there, but didn't immediately read it for what it is. And at the size of an app icon, or even at logo size in the app screens, it will be too small for sure. Also, maybe add one detail that gives a nod to the photos part of this app, which seems to be the main draw. Right now it just communicates "chat"... It should probably say "chat about photos".
- i_monk0
The curves of the blue outline don't match the curves of the white letters, particularly along the top of the FL! part.
- omg0
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