Logo Crit
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- sleepyfatso0
first one is a bike chain company
third one is swiss army knife
fifth one looks like the little dude are eating the f
- detritus0
Is it just me, or is there a little too much air inbetween the letterforms here? Not really feel the 'connectivity' in any of them, I'm afraid - the focus us on the ifi - and I can't inately work out what you're trying to tell me.
If I were you, I'd explore Initial-Caps more - NODIFI looks like No Difi to me, which makes little to no sense.
- SoulFly0
I'm not feeling it.
But #1 and #4 is the direction to go.
Also - looks a bit blurry - maybe res-up the comps a little, or away with the shadow.
- jysta0
Agree - 1# and 4# for direction but visually need big changes.
Also would like to see one with a more humanist typeface in lowercase.IMO no drop shadow ;-)
GL / HF
- desmo0
Thanks for the feedback guys!