Site Design Crit 44 Responses

Last post: 1 year, 11 months ago | Thread started: Mar 10, 10, 10:52 a.m.

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• SigDesign

  This one had to be thrown together very rapidly yesterday:

  http://www.instantaction.com

  Unleash your fury on the logo, visual design etc... thanks very much for your criticism. This is a temporary page, here's what the top part will look like in a day:

  

  And, here's one game page:

  

  Mar 10, 10, 10:52 a.m. – Permalink

• ETM

  Design aside... I can't imagine how one can play such a contemporary game in browser.

  • surprise... :)– SigDesign1/2

    but really...need design crits... I've been staring at these things so long I don't know anything– SigDesign2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 10, 10, 11:11 a.m. – Permalink

• Hombre_Lobo

  On the whole i think its pretty decent.

  RE - http://www.instantaction.com
  I liked the bottom half of the page, clean and sharp, however the top half, where there is that large image, appears slapped on. Doesnt seem to tie in with the rest of the page.

  The logo isnt doing it for me, the style seems right for hardcore young geeky gamers that love those metal shiny logos, but it isnt there for me.

  as for -http://www.nickwoods.us/force.j...
  Maybe make the content and body structure stand off the page a little more than it is, seems to get lost with the dark bg image.

  I like it though, its clean and easy to follow and its not boring and playing it too safe :)

  • Thanks for the feedback Hombre. The logo was not an easy process... I prefer using it flat, etc...– SigDesign1/2

    btw, the top half was indeed slapped on yesterday... the normal top half will be up in a day or two– SigDesign2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 10, 10, 11:24 a.m. – Permalink

• Hombre_Lobo

  on your blog -
  

  

  awesome.

  • He works hard and he PLAYS HARD!– ideaist1/2

    hahaha– SigDesign2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 10, 10, 11:26 a.m. – Permalink

• jonturi

  on a quick look...cool. very 2.0 clear info

  that top bit and the black box on top right drags my eye into the black margins. maybe add border or change color or something? IMO

  • or run a grey margin all the way up?– jonturi

  

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  Dog-earMar 10, 10, 11:29 a.m. – Permalink