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• identity

  haha - "woman owned"...

  ...which means rounded objects and a pastel color-scheme?

  • <– utopian1/3

    Gah! I'm turning into a real feminist in my old age...– identity2/3

    safe to say its for women.yes?– 74LEO3/3

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 4:10 p.m. – Permalink

• RoyBoyII

  5 but type needs to be more a more prominent colour..

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 4:17 p.m. – Permalink

• utopian

  Could you have made the logos any lighter? Will these logos even translate into greyscale or b/w?

  • The logos will be specified as printing with varnishes.– Josev1/2

    ya what about faxes and things like that make sure you make a darker greyscale version– traut2/2

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 4:17 p.m. – Permalink

• luckyorphan

  4 does it for me, but I would have to agree that the color palette could use a little pushing. As you're seeing here, on white, the image tends to ghost abit and become hard to read. 5 is nice as well, and you can see how a more saturated color (the silhouette) comes forward and pushes the text back even further.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 4:53 p.m. – Permalink

• monospaced

  I think you have something interesting going on in 6.

  Is this women only or something?

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:12 p.m. – Permalink

• inkpink

  ummm... def not 5.

  my pick would be a combination of 2 and 4. I like the ~ but prefer the italic font.

  • + try the tilde ~ and lowercase italic "r" on their own, might make a nice alternate icon.– inkpink

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:15 p.m. – Permalink

• dirtydesign

  cant really see whats going on with these, but i'm diggin 4 and 6.
  def try em in black and white first.

  • yes bigger image would help– inkpink

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:18 p.m. – Permalink

• evanburke

  Yeah do not go with #5, silhouettes = corny.

  #1 and #6 are both pretty interesting. I like them. I'd like to see you try some of the other logotypes as the text inside the bubbles for #1.

  #4 is the safe choice, but also a bit boring. It's a solid logotype.

  • I'm glad people started speaking up on 5. I didn't like it. Client request.– dubbya

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:28 p.m. – Permalink

• dubbya

  Sorry first post like this, I bumped up the linked file so it should be easier to read when clicked.

  Thanks for the good feedback. I agree with the color, curvy comments but for this particular client the pallet suits them well. I'll definitely bump up the saturation.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:54 p.m. – Permalink

• inkpink

  yes i'd def like to see the #2 tilde applied to #4 italic font.

  my 2 cents.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 5:55 p.m. – Permalink

• iCanHasQBN

  4.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 6:01 p.m. – Permalink

• iCanHasQBN

  4.

  • # 8?– OSFA

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 6:01 p.m. – Permalink

• gramme

  Six is the only one that I see having any promise, but it's not really blowing my hair back either. The rest are bland, and devoid of concept (OK, #5 has a concept but not a great one). The italic fonts in 4–5 are your best effort in terms of type.

  I suggest further research into the meaning of renewal and rejuvenation. Surely there's a rich lode of symbology that you can glean from.

  Agree with what others said re: color.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 6:09 p.m. – Permalink

• SoulFly

  With exception of #1, they are all pretty much the same logo in my point of view.
  I believe #1 will "transpire" (get it? transpire) better in the overall woman's training surrounding. I can definitely see that #1 logo on some chicks t-shirt during aerobics class; printed in water-bottles or in wall motifs around the locker-room.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 6:56 p.m. – Permalink

• dan100200z

  #1 is best

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 7:36 p.m. – Permalink

• Gucci

  Why not dress up a letter r and make it feel lovingly hand drawn, feminine etc? Might also be interesting for the possibilities not related to fitness. Anyhoo... just a thought to break you out of a mould. Plus, it's not terribly cliche for women's fitness.

  Other than that, I think #s 1 and 6 are most promising.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 8:55 p.m. – Permalink

• whatsup

  #1 There's something interesting about how the shapes work together here but meaningless. All that mini-type is useless for a logo.
  #4 is straight forward and clean/ boring
  #5 I like the iconic symbol, but the type does not go with if you remove the fine print.
  #6 would be good for organic food.

  I would think about mixing #4 and #5 together. definitely scrap the rest. Definitely darken these color shades.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 8, 10, 9:45 p.m. – Permalink

• mynameisdave

  4 with something similar to the swirly icon from 2. Swirly icon needs developed a bit more.

  And the colors are horrible. I can barely read the green text. Saturation needs pushed up in everything.

  

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  Dog-earFeb 9, 10, 12:56 a.m. – Permalink

• pixelinc

  gramme's on the money here - need more relevance - time for a bit of thesaurus action.

  Main Entry: renew
  Part of Speech: verb
  Definition: start over; refurbish
  Synonyms:
  begin again, brace, breathe new life into, bring up to date, continue, exhilarate, extend, fix up, freshen, gentrify, go over, mend, modernize, overhaul, prolong, reaffirm, reawaken, recommence, recondition, recreate, reestablish, refit, refresh, regenerate, rehabilitate, reinvigorate, rejuvenate, remodel, renovate, reopen, repair, repeat, replace, replenish, restate, restock, restore, resume, resuscitate, retread, revitalize, revive, spruce, stimulate, transform

  

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  Dog-earFeb 9, 10, 1:16 a.m. – Permalink

• Amicus

  #2 does have a concept... it's a girl running on a treadmill, isn't it? Work on that concept and possibly #6.

  I'm guessing you haven't got the pencils out and doodled. Do this for ten minutes before you start concepting... just let your mind wander and start scribbling away. Then get back on the job - pencil and paper, before you even think about the computer or fonts or anything.

  Good luck.

  • how do you see a girl running on a treadmill in there?– jazmine1/2

    A pony tale. It wasn't intended, but interesting. Not sure about the reference.– dubbya2/2

  

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  Dog-earFeb 9, 10, 1:22 a.m. – Permalink