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Last post: 2 years, 4 months ago | Thread started: Oct 3, 09, 2:02 p.m.

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• baseline_shift

  Working up an album cover for a local hip hop group.

  Thoughts on these two. Preferences?

  Also, check the differences between the type. Which is workin for you?

  

  
  

  

  Oct 3, 09, 2:02 p.m. – Permalink

• doesnotexist

  2nd- placement could be refined a bit though. more play between tension and scale. type treatment is a bit better as well- maybe make the i-l-l letters come down/extend to different lengths?

  nice work.

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:03 p.m. – Permalink

• ukit

  lol @ the name

  agree with doesnotexist - the type doesn't seem positioned or sized exactly right. I wonder what the top photo would look like with the treatment of the second one.

  • i know, wacky name huh?!
    – baseline_shift

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:07 p.m. – Permalink

• akrokdesign

  needs a better shot.

  • yes yes yes– doesnotexist1/3

    which? Both potentially?– baseline_shift2/3

    first is better, both are wanting.– doesnotexist3/3

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:12 p.m. – Permalink

• utopian

  The type on the second version, with the image from the first image that is in black and white not a screen.

  • My sentiments exactly.– thatboyneave

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:14 p.m. – Permalink

• doesnotexist

  print that shit in gold

  • ha! i wish. B+W low budget piece– baseline_shift1/3

    silver paper maybe?– doesnotexist2/3

    interesting... ill look at that– baseline_shift3/3

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:14 p.m. – Permalink

• baseline_shift

  

  
  type update

  • scale the o in amd bring the j flush with the k ? make the m upper case?– doesnotexist

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:17 p.m. – Permalink

• Debut_and_Fin

  I prefer the second one, make the logotype bigger and lower it will then do itself more justice, would like to see what your planning on doing with the back also.

  • cheers. Not sure yet. want to get into a good direction with the cover first.– baseline_shift1/2

    just as important, maybe even harder to design..– Debut_and_Fin2/2

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:18 p.m. – Permalink

• digdre

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 2:18 p.m. – Permalink

• OSFA

  2 as well... I would like to see - and you dont have to do it - something more 'urban' like graffiti style fonts, like those really cool ones on 1001freefonts. Again, you don't have to do this, but I would like to see that. ;)

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 7:04 p.m. – Permalink

• hellojeehae

  the name is soooo badass

  • Is it badass or just bad?– ukit

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 7:11 p.m. – Permalink

• duckofrubber

  the 'n' looks like an 'h'

  • agree.– akrokdesign1/2

    +1 maybe drop the gap between the m and n lower so the m gets extended downward slightly– thatboyneave2/2

  

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  Dog-earOct 3, 09, 7:51 p.m. – Permalink

• baseline_shift

  Monday bump!
  

  

  • where the hook on the g meets the l looks off. aaaaalmost looks like a face...like a darth vader face.– doesnotexist1/2

    agreed, maybe make the "I" meet the G on the bottom of the G hook. Not at the top.– jnnbugg2/2

  

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  Dog-earOct 5, 09, 8:42 a.m. – Permalink