motion graphics feedback 1818 Responses

Last post: 3 months, 3 weeks ago | Thread started: Jul 28, 08, 12:02 p.m.

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• Esco1782

  Looking for some feedback on a motion graphics personal project I did. Any tips or pointers is much appreciated, especially with compositing and camera work. I'm definitely going to fix the sound (I think you will agree that fading out the music is a bit lame). Anyways, thanks in advance for any tips/pointers. :)

  http://vimeo.com/1404003

  Jul 28, 08, 12:02 p.m. – Permalink

• chossy

  Nothing wrong with it well done :) keep up the good work.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:05 p.m. – Permalink

• fyoucher1

  a lil' too chaotic for my liking. maybe slim down on the stars that fly out.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:06 p.m. – Permalink

• Meeklo

  animation wise, looks great. good timing and good camera movements.

  Design wise, I'm not sure.. burton has really good desing. Not saying that this was bad, I just think might not reach their bar.

  Just my opinion

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:06 p.m. – Permalink

• mia_free

  no esta mal pero nesesita mas elementos de accion en los momentos estaticos.

  • English plz– ukit1/2

    not bad at all but could use a little more action during the static sequences.– mia_free2/2

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:10 p.m. – Permalink

• locustsloth

  wicked! Looks great

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:14 p.m. – Permalink

• Mishga

  Like the way it started, and the ending...i think you should try working with the z axis and give more punch to the middle part
  Great animation skills btw...Keep working!
  Cheers!=)

  And Mia_Free said:
  "It's quite good, but you need more animated action elements on the dead times.."

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:14 p.m. – Permalink

• fbuddha

  many nice touches but i would work on the end. dont see the benefit of zooming out to show the entire comp, its too busy at that point to get any meaningful info and throws off the pacing because it stops on the arrow bounce, then needs to pick up momentum again to form the logo. should be simpler.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:17 p.m. – Permalink

• Esco1782

  thanks for all the feedback guys. i agree with some of the speed-momentum issues. i really want to make it feel seamless and smooth but im having a tough time bringing it all to a close.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:24 p.m. – Permalink

• Ramanisky2

  you did really good there .. I liked it a lot

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 12:26 p.m. – Permalink

• Barry_Grant

  I've never been to Tokyo yet, but something tells me I will love it .... shit wrong thread

  • and yet you hit post...– NONEIS

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 1:18 p.m. – Permalink

• NONEIS

  Looks pretty good, I would try and add some more depth if possible, and perhaps some more movement once each rider resolves. It feels like it primarily moves along the x-axis, but your other 3D movements are far more compelling, see if you can match that with the rider transitions.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 1:30 p.m. – Permalink

• jshaw3

  legit yo good work!

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 1:40 p.m. – Permalink

• Samush

  yeh really nice work, impressed. i want skills like yours!

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 2:02 p.m. – Permalink

• Esco1782

  thanks! i want skills like psyop and shilo!

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 2:14 p.m. – Permalink

• robotron3k

  haute!

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 2:15 p.m. – Permalink

• wordsinyourmouth

  dugg it man, sweet job

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 2:18 p.m. – Permalink

• dog_opus

  You do great work – I checked out all three that you have up. Didn't like the music for the Kobe piece, though.

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 5:48 p.m. – Permalink

• utopian1

  nice work, but please kill the rap music does not evoke the brand, style or nature of Burton or snowboarding in general and certainly does not compliment your grundy raw style of motion & animation!

  

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  Dog-earJul 28, 08, 5:59 p.m. – Permalink