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what do you lot fink (think) of this?
- moamoa0
kindergarten
- i did the photography. there is nothing about design here.********
- i did the photography. there is nothing about design here.
- ian0
I think the girl in the middle is nice. That is all.
- moamoa0
this composition is horrible, no discussion.
- ********0
i guess i should have said its a rough draft.
- slappy0
photography nice!
background looks like a shart in a bath.
- 7point340
i'll agree the photos look professional...
also agree that the background is random and too far removed from the subjects. also i'm missing the concept here? unless it's "hey look, models. a green screen. cool"
- detritus0
There was some work posted here last week that had un-cutouted imagery, with some Hubblesque starfield image overlaid across it and I thought it looked great - kind of an urban scene. It really made the piece look deep and disco. Wish I could recall what it was.
On the other hand, what you've tried here doesn't really work (imo, of course) not trying to be critical - it's just that background image is quite dreary and lifeless. If you're wanting to go down this route, try overlaying another starfield image or jazzing up the colour saturation - at the moment it's a bit muddy and irrelevant.
- "un-cutouted imagery".
Brilliant.detritus - Try playing with these, maybe?
http://images.google…detritus - damn those r huge. Thanks.********
- "un-cutouted imagery".
- doesnotexist0
i would blow the images of the girls up way more than they are, maybe it's the scale with relation to SPACE and that logo in the upper left. needs something, not working right now.
softer edges on those girls!
- ********0
i got the background from some Nasa like website with large space images. They are supposed to be kinda falling from teh sky... well thru space. I have this image of the moon in HiRes that I would like to use as a surface for them to land on.
the background needs some saturation, yes. I'd like to add I cropped the chixx out of their backgrounds in under 2 hrs using polygon lasso in imageready which crashed on me like 3x cuz the images were so huge.
thanks for the critiquin'
- PEN tool. Nuff said. You're wasting your time with that lasso.duckofrubber
- doesnotexist0
play with relationship of scale between all the figures because right now they're not falling, they're singing on the stage that is space.
SCALE
- PonyBoy0
^doesn't feel like they're floating in space at all..
... the background is nasty... get an image that's primarily black... some stars and complimentary colors in the stars (complimentary to what they're wearing)... cuz right now it looks like a bunch of cut outs of women in dopey poses set against a big turd-colored background.
The fashion needs to pop... not the background... use the background elements sparingly - enough to sell the concept of space and let the girls / fashion do their thing...
... maybe twist / turn the girls a bit... they're def. not 'floating'... just looking dorky... 'specially the lil lady on the right.
... and what the heck are you doing using image-ready to join images? Get's yerself some photoshoppy!
- let's agree to disagreedoesnotexist
- like your comments thoughdoesnotexist
- i'm suddenly very confusedPonyBoy
- ... and I LIKE IT! :DPonyBoy
- i got photoshop but not on my gfs pc. i'll be moving my box in soon.********
- ohhhh... doesnotexist - the arrow pointing up wasn't for you... it was for gerald - his message b4 you!! :)PonyBoy