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Last post: 3 months, 4 weeks ago | Thread started: Apr 30, 08, 9:03 a.m.

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• OSFA

  Here's a new idea I'm working on, what do y'all think? Comments and suggestions are welcomed...

  

  http://www.osfaland.com/

  PS. I'm still working on it, hnce the hosting...

  Apr 30, 08, 9:03 a.m. – Permalink

• capsize

  18000!!

  • but its no blog– capsize

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:03 a.m. – Permalink

• harlequino

  wuzzit? folio site?

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:04 a.m. – Permalink

• moamoa

  could be a better kerning...
  and no gradient, please...

  the sf solution isn´t perfect yet

  • just talking about the logo :)– moamoa

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:04 a.m. – Permalink

• drgs

  i think of a scene from 'the shining'
  creepy

  • I know. I am creeped out.– Jaline

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:05 a.m. – Permalink

• 7point34

  reminds me of this
  

  

  what's it for?

  • same thought– ismith

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:05 a.m. – Permalink

• OSFA

  personal site, work, rants, etc...

  • that's what QBN is for– Ampersanderson

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:06 a.m. – Permalink

• cosmicEntity

  I really like the top banner: "Turbo Charged Web Hosting!" impressive

  • hahaha!– OSFA

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:07 a.m. – Permalink

• flavorful

  Must be pretty prestigious if all those white men ages 18-60 are in it.

  • the skulls 51st annual roast– 7point341/2

    you bet!– OSFA2/2

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:08 a.m. – Permalink

• harlequino

  I love the image. I hope you continue that sepia barbershop aesthetic throughout. Big moustaches. Really. Big. Moustaches.

  • osfache.com– 7point34

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:08 a.m. – Permalink

• ian

  I quite like the typeface but it reads awkwardly to me, like o sf aland, I think its the spacing and how the 'aland' is joined up. Its a good start.

  But that being said, I am not taking part in another dream-bashing crit today, nosir, you're not getting me that easy!

  • yup, I know what u mean, working on that..– OSFA

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:12 a.m. – Permalink

• kelpie

  surely with your photoshop skills you could put your face on every one of those gentlemen. That would rock.

  • hahaha I was thinking on placing it in just one a la Waldo...– OSFA1/3

    I think you'd kind of stick out there Diego.– flavorful2/3

    hahaha!– OSFA3/3

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 9:13 a.m. – Permalink

• OSFA

  Quick question moamoa, do you have any suggestions for the sf treatment? Thanks!

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 10:58 a.m. – Permalink

• utopian

  Looks too Web 2.0

  • The logo that is.– utopian1/2

    Focus more detail on "OSFA" less on the "land"– utopian2/2

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 11:01 a.m. – Permalink

• emukid

  in the greater scheme of things, what difference does it make whether i like your design?

  • believe it or not brotha, it means a lot... ;)
    – OSFA1/2

    i was just trying to annoy janne. i like the logo and suggest what the guy below suggested.– emukid2/2

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 11:15 a.m. – Permalink

• Ampersanderson

  I like it, but that logo needs a good dose of kerning. "aland" should spatially match the "sf" ligature

  • agreed– Dr_Rand

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 11:31 a.m. – Permalink

• fyoucher1

  Make it bigger!

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 11:36 a.m. – Permalink

• creative-

  I'm disappointed that when I turn it 90° it doesn't look like a dude knocking one off

  • which side did you turn it on... i can see the O as ahead and the d as feet... f as arms and well... yeah– 7point341/2

    haha!– OSFA2/2

  

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  Dog-earApr 30, 08, 1:04 p.m. – Permalink

• OSFA

  I did a few adjustments, better?

  

  • works for me... i like– 7point341/2

    Me too - though it's a shame there isn't some flourish towards the end of the mark to balance out..– detritus2/2

  

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  Dog-earMay 2, 08, 10:27 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  what's the confidential stamp for? texture?

  

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  Dog-earMay 2, 08, 10:55 a.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  also what's under the image? is that a reflection?

  

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  Dog-earMay 2, 08, 10:56 a.m. – Permalink