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  • monospaced0

    Overall, conceptually, I don't think it works. Sorry. A knife is obvious both for 'cut' and restaurant, and the rest just seems thrown in. A star for no reason, a red ribbon, for no reason. Conceptually, you could really have fun. Cut the type, relate it to a restaurant guide, etc. What you're showing is really one concept with things pushed around. Try to come up with at least 20 completely separate concepts, some with illustration, some type only, some really out there, and then come back, perhaps. That's my advice.

    • Ok, thanks, solid advice. The star and ribbon could be related to the grading system in the book, but you're right it's a bit too irrelevant at the moment.eoin
    • irrelevant at the moment.eoin
    • ...good adviceMiesfan

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