Photography portfolio crit
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- fyoucher10
Love the work. Website is clean and minimal but here's some feedback.
Bug:
- Sometimes the info details for the pics don't appear. If I go to another section and then come back, then they reappear. I'm on OSX and FF8 btw.Text overall (Navigation and photo details copy):
Don't like the centered copy. It's creating weird shapes and leaving a few words on the last line in the paragraph (i.e. Central America & Mexico, it leaves a few words on the last line.)Navigation:
Again, not crazy about the centered text. Maybe look into another option. You'll probably end up running into issues when you have more work and more sub-nav items.I would put About and Contact somewhere else, out of the work nav possibly. Thought it was harder to find than it should be. That should be one of the easiest things to navigate to. Maybe even keep it up while you're browsing through the work.
About and Contact section:
Again, not crazy about the center-aligned copy. Would love to see a picture of "the photographer". Give some life to your personal story, like how your work does. Maybe even change the boldness, color, or something to the contact info so it stands out more.Extras:
Would be nice if I clicked an image I got a high-rez full-screen version.- Heh, didn't even notice your "Personal section". Good stuff, like the toesfyoucher1